(I’ve given up smoking)

I crank it up

To the start of the fin

And get a lot of use out

Of the pin that

Sticks in my heart

But lot if it is useful

Where I need to be I shall

Go but not in the end

Shall I feel

Better unless

You understand

That I will be

A sure-shot into

The goal

Of your mouth.


Copyright B E Saunders 2016

  1. Hey you are really kind – I simply start with the title in this case and let it flow – I have an Inner voice that I allow to dictate my flash poetry – sometimes it works and sometimes it don’t but better or worse, it goes online. Thanks friend.


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