D’Verse: Ode to the Moon
Hello my Love
Thank you so much for appearing here yet again today
On my blog
Just to see you here on my stats helps
Just to check
To show me you are there
Aware.
Beaute!
Bye!
Copyright B E Saunders 2016
—TOO LONELY TO MAKE SENSE – AGELESS POETRY – DADA
Bioman
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TOO LONELY TO MAKE SENSE - AGELESS POETRY - DADA 
Clever little note to your love, the moon.
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LOL…this is delight!
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SMiLes my friEnd
Bio-man.. so true..
a moon WiLL
shine freely
on aLL
blog posts..
findS inSpiRatioN
oF liGht no matter
welcome or delete
sAMe.. heHe.. noW
as long as my moon shines
i’M
drunK
aS Love..:)
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And she likes to click the blue stars =)
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I like this interesting take on the prompt.
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Just one I had prepared earlier…:)
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Very nice poem but not a haibun. Today is Haibun Monday which means we write haibun to a prompt. Thank you for trying. You may want to go and read other entries for today and see what a haibun is. It is a prosimetric form based on the original travelogue by Basho. One to three tight paragraphs are ended with a true, classic haiku.
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It;’s quite funny – I don;t mind criticism but perhaps you would like to read a poem that is a haibum – tonight’s and not last week’s which was not?
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Yes, I would love for you to submit a haibun about the night sky for today’s prompt! Please feel free in submitting one. the prompt is open for several days.
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I have don so – see the link biomansecure
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Thank you. the link is not yet showing up on my site so I shall be around directly to read and enjoy.
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You will need to link up this at Mr. Linky on our webpage and as of this reading, I do not see your haibun.
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That’s strange – not under the name “biomansecure”?? Because it is there I assure you!
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I see the poem you submitted that you wrote last week but no “biomansecure” on the Mr. Linky on the dVerse Poets Pub page.
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Consider yourself reprimanded 😉
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https://roughtradegibson.wordpress.com/2016/09/05/haibun-twinkle-twinkle/
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Oh, dear! I fear a reprimand also…
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Okay – consider yourself reprimanded! 😉
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Oh well, I’ll pass on it. Thanks for the offer..
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I’ll tell you what – you continue to be sarcastic with the Mentally Disabled like you know it is too much to ask to check your own history and follow the links. Fuck Off Sister!
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I finally found the link of which you are speaking, under a reply from Katiemiafrederick? You need to link it to the Mr. Linky on the dVerse Poets Pub page so others can read it. Like I said in the prompt, if you are unfamiliar with the haibun form, then you need to read the posts of others linked on the dVerse Poets page. The haibun as you have written it is interesting, however, you did not link it. I’m not sure what all the “consider yourself reprimanded” is about and why the link is on the Katiemiafrederick reply to yourself. Otherwise….
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Fuck you and your “otherwise”. Would you like me to explain machine architecture to you as well and how to click a few extra times cos you are “lost”? Don’t expect a happy answer from a asshole who has no respect for lazy minds.
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No. I do not need you to explain machine architecture to me or anything else. You are a rude and crude man and I hope you go someplace else to insult other people and make your day perfect for you.
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Oh – so you’ve read my poetry then Sweetheart – wafankulu!
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Tell me – I am disabled – what is YOUR fucking excuse for breathing and getting your rocks off wasting my time with your lack of computer skills?
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